Lvl 140 "Omnom Nom Nom!"

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Achivements:

"Shopkeepers Best Friend" --> "Shopkeeper's Best Friend" or "Shopkeepers' Best Friend"
"Other Peoples Problems" --> "Other People's Problems"
"Another Mans Trash" --> "Another Man's Trash"
"Won a 'Diamond !'" --> "Won a 'Diamond' !"

Titles:

"Other Peoples Problem Solver !" --> "Other People's Problem Solver !"
"Gem Horder" --> "Gem Hoarder"

Inventory Items:

Some descriptions end in a punctuation mark and some don't. (It doesn't seem to have anything to do whether they're complete sentences or not.)

"Wooden Couch | Don't worry the pillows are not wooden." --> comma after "worry"
"Welcome Mat | [...] wait you don't have a door." --> comma after "wait"
"Evergreen Table | A small tabel crafted from Evergreen materials." --> "evergreen" shouldn't be capitalized (it isn't in the Evergreen Stool's description)
"Alligator Tropiary | It's shaped like your best Alligator friend!" --> "Topiary", and "alligator" shouldn't be capitalized
"Firefly Lamp | A new Firefly camps in the lamp in every night." --> "firefly" shouldn't be capitalized, and I think there is an "in" too much
"Red Foot Stool" description has an incomplete ellipsis
"Wall Snow Shoes | You can put these Snow Shoes up on your back wall!" --> "show shoes" should be lower case in description
"Gravestone | RIP top right corner of this Gravestone" --> "gravestone" should be lower case in description
"Potted Mushroom" --> "nuclear power plant" should be lower case in description

There are some in NPC dialogues as well, unfortunately I don't remember them... I go through the dialogues to quickly and now I can't bring them back up. Sorry :\